This describes the sea, horizon and sky on this post-summer solstice, quiet evening on the west coast of Baja.
Small grey waves, with a frosting of white froth, caress the beach.
[Edited on 6-23-2008 by Gypsy Jan]bajamigo - 6-22-2008 at 06:13 PM
Canadian haiku?
Ahh soo
Gypsy Jan - 6-22-2008 at 06:21 PM
Sadly, I am not that exotic.bajamigo - 6-22-2008 at 06:23 PM
Only missed real haiku by three syllables!!
How About Adding
Gypsy Jan - 6-22-2008 at 06:26 PM
a gull cries?
If you like it, it will change.bajamigo - 6-22-2008 at 06:33 PM
Don't go changin.'bajajudy - 6-22-2008 at 09:06 PM
I thought that you had run into the same problem that my husband had years ago with DMV. They said his hair was gray...he said it was silver.
We have had no horizon for two days....everything is silver or gray.bajalera - 6-23-2008 at 03:03 PM
Haikuized:
Small and grey the waves,
with a frosting of white froth,\
that caress the beach.Gypsy Jan - 6-23-2008 at 09:30 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by bajajudy
I thought that you had run into the same problem that my husband had years ago with DMV. They said his hair was gray...he said it was silver.
We have had no horizon for two days....everything is silver or gray.
He should have told them that his category was "Silver Fox".Gypsy Jan - 6-23-2008 at 09:32 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by bajalera
Haikuized:
Small and grey the waves,
with a frosting of white froth,\
that caress the beach.
